Final PN Reflection

When transition from my Shitty First Draft to my Revised Draft and finally after meeting with Mat, I was impressed on how many ideas I kept from my Shitty First Draft into my Revised Draft. Also after meeting with Mat over my Revised Draft I was thankful since he showed me my flaws and how I could improve my essay as I was inconsistent with providing details I throughout my story, I had to incorporate more of the "show don't tell" aspects.